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Question by nik nik: can someone please help?
would like for someone to read over this for me and give me their input and make any corrections they might see

The theoretical framework for the article by Sung and Richter (2007) is there are different options need to be considered for offenders entering drug treatment and leaving drug abuse treatment centers prematurely. The article points out all offenders are assessed the same way even though each drug offender has different problems and needs to be assessed on an individual bases. Also it needs to be taken into consideration why the drug abuser started using drugs and what can be done to prevent them from relapsing after their release from treatment.
Based on this article most of theses programs such as drug court, prosecutor lead program, community based program are based on Beccaria and Bentham’s classical theory method. One of the concepts in the classical theory is controlling behavior is fear, particularly fear of pain or punishment and through criminals will directed to make correct choices. The majority of criminals with drug violations do not enter rehabilitation or residential treatment at there on free will but through programs set up by the prosecutors and the courts. This is an example of how contemporary policies of today use the founding concepts of criminology to mold today’s criminal justice system.

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Answer by sdmisir
I used caps to indicate the revisions I would make to make the paper stronger. I feel the ending is a little unclear. I hope my efforts were helpful.

IN theoretical framework for the article “NAME THE ARTICLE” by Sung and Richter (2007), there are different options need to be considered for offenders entering drug treatment AS WELL AS leaving drug abuse treatment centers prematurely. The article points out all offenders are assessed the same way even though each drug offender has different problems INDICATING THE NEED TO be assessed on an individual BASIS. Also it needs to be taken into consideration why the drug abuser started using drugs TO DETERMINE what can be done to prevent them from relapsing after their release from treatment.
Based on this article most of THESE programs such as drug court, prosecutor lead program, community based program are based on Beccaria and Bentham’s classical theory method. One of the concepts in the classical theory is controlling behavior is fear, particularly fear of pain or punishment THE REST OF THIS SENTENCE IS UNCLEAR: REWORD FOR CLARITY and through criminals will directed to make correct choices. The majority of criminals with drug violations do not enter rehabilitation or residential treatment at THEIR OWN FREE will but through programs set up by the prosecutors OF the courts. THE EXAMPLE IS UNCLEAR. GIVE MORE DETAIL. This is an example of how contemporary policies of today use the founding concepts of criminology to mold today’s criminal justice system.

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